*~Daydreams of Heaven~*

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Yesterday was the birthday of my best friends late brother, the year anniversary of his aunt's death, 6 months since another friend's mom passed, and other friends were grieving the loss of their loved ones. It seemed everywhere I turned there was sadness. I felt inspired to write this poem. Not that it will ease the pain, but that we should all have that hope for something bigger and better than this.

*~Daydreams of Heaven~*

Heaven is a paradise I've heard of all my life.

A place where there's no pain or tears.  No struggling or strife.

 

When at last God calls me home, I wonder what I'll see.

Will all those loved and lost be there to welcome me?

 

Will I spend time with my grandfather?  Hear stories never told?

Will I walk beside the Lord, the savior of my soul?

 

I've heard it said in Heaven, that there is no day or night.

But I imagine I'll hear mandolin 'round a fire in the moonlight.

 

Will we paint the sky with sunsets?  Can we sculpt the puffy clouds?

Can we look down on our loved ones and smile 'cause they've made us proud?

 

With no need to eat or drink, can we still have barbecues?

It would be a celebration with our friends and families, too.

 

Are there oceans there to swim in, with no worry that we'll drown?

Will laughter, music, harmony, love and peace abound?

 

Will the children play and roll down hills?  Spend time climbing trees?

Will we dance among the daffodils, blowing in the breeze?

 

Can I sit in on a jam session with musicians long been gone?

Jimi, Janis, Waylon, Hank, the list goes on and on!

 

No need for money there.  No violence, no addiction.

No more broken hearts.  No diseases, no afflictions.

 

Will all nations be at peace?  There will be no need for war.

Race, language, politics, won't matter anymore.

 

We will all look at eachother with no judgement and no hate.

We will all be perfect there.  I can hardly wait.

 

Hear thunder crash, watch lightning strike from somewhere far above.

See the Earth rinsed clean by rain, like sin cleansed by God's love.

 

Time and space go on forever.  Far past infinity.

In my mind there surely is no better place to be.

 

With great big hugs and endless smiles, no worries and no cares.

We'll live on 'til eternity.  I hope to see you there.

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EyemMatt commented on *~Daydreams of Heaven~*

06-12-2012

Our Lord has blessed you with a wonderful gift... thank you for sharing that gift with us. I've always said that this life is like a boot camp or school. At our appointed time we all will be called to graduate. Keep writing and keep smiling. thank you again.

KLS commented on *~Daydreams of Heaven~*

11-09-2011

I really enjoyed this write! Keep it up. Heaven sounds just great.

jj1562 commented on *~Daydreams of Heaven~*

10-25-2011

I sure hope that's how it will be. PLEASE GIVE ME BBQs

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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