emotions

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    emotions

    Here i sit empty bare,
    heart in my hands,
    blank hollow just a stare.

    Here i stand vehicle motioning,
    broken from the inside out,
    mind ticking over just notioning,
    soul ripped torn put in doubt.

    Here i lay transgressed,
    tainted and tortured,
    swelling emotions surpressed.

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    litldeer commented on emotions

    06-17-2009

    Short but profound. Such sadness and I read the pain, it went straight to my heart. A good poet can take the reader on a trip and that is where I go when I read your work. Excellent again.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    etheraledict’s Poems (20)

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    Title Comments
    Nature's Nest 2
    Paradox 1
    innocence shed 3
    tired 2
    fora friend.... 0
    emotions soar 1
    what she sees 1
    caught by sadness 0
    the one from above 1
    love at dusk 1
    trapped 1
    purgatory 2
    broken promises 1
    who we are 1
    love waiting to begin 2
    emotions 1
    waiting 1
    senses 1
    Angels 1
    Muted Society 1