waiting

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  • Passion

    waiting

    Waiting wanting shallow breaths for lips to part,
    night turns blind truths opened,
    feeling burning intensity beckons to start,
    rising passion heat of sweat spirit floating.

    Yearning body melt sway slow,
    plagued mind stop silence this clutter,
    soul heart head twisted elegance do i know,
    words just words love should i utter.

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    litldeer commented on waiting

    06-17-2009

    I've written a few poems using words as you do. You put words that normally don't go together and make them flow like the ocean. I was always afraid to share this. You make it so real. This is excellent.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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