purgatory

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    purgatory

    Red skies turn to royal blue,
    melting lava that cools in the night's frost,
    screams from the corridor,
    tainted souls,
    blackened hearts,
    blindness eradicates imagination,
    not blind,
    just hiding,
    hiding from the swarming masses,
    they pick ur bones clean,
    imagination prevails in purgatory,
    where ur soul is owned,
    but ur mind is free,
    roaming angels that dote on blackness,
    not pure and white,
    blackness,
    screams in my mind,
    my soul is tainted,
    i sink into darkness,
    blackness,
    red skies turn to royal blue,
    but only in my dreams,
    blackness,
    and swarming vulchers.

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    litldeer commented on purgatory

    06-17-2009

    Great visuals. This is one of your poems that doesn't rhyme and I love it. You could actually write both ways and excel at both. I don't rhyme much when I write. I don't really know how, but you inspire me. Maybe I'll try it. Great job. This gets a 10

    pocketofdreams6 commented on purgatory

    06-17-2009

    Yes Yes Yes, I love your style. You have great potential to be a legend some day. I'm adding you as a friend!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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