the one from above

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    the one from above

    When day fades to night,

    where last rays vanish from sight,

    u curl up in a corner to shed ur tears,

    alone in this world facing heartache an fears,

    ur hopes forgotten an dreams left behind,

    u have buried yourself in a place in ur mind,

    u pray to be set free asking for love,

    knowing only he can deliver he from above,

    in the dark ur hour of need the voice speaks clear,

    stop dry ur tears for in ur heart i reside here,

    despair disappears as dawn's light shines,

    love was here all along ur pain closed ur eyes blind,

    sit no more in the dark turn ur face to my light,

    for i will grant u love an freedom just let ur soul take flight.

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    Richisfun commented on the one from above

    06-17-2009

    Oh well , i think u have a winner here, done perfectly, very poetically, love yr thoughts on this one, these are my thoughts as well, pain hid the light, love it

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    senses 1
    Angels 1
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