trapped

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  • Sadness

    trapped

    Im trapped in this life,

    a life of pain and strife,

    this life trapped within me,

    cant let go or break free.

    Im trapped in this love,

    a love of condition a love not enough.

    this love trapped within me,

    lifeless passion the love u dont see.

    Im trapped in this mind,

    a mind of doubt with answers to find,

    this mind trapped within me,

    waiting hoping u will hear my plea

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    litldeer commented on trapped

    06-17-2009

    This one another of your poems that brought me sadness for you. Your writing is filled with pain and sorrow. That is why we write sometimes, when we ache, from love or life. You do a great job getting to the reader and sharing your pain. I'm sad now.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    etheraledict’s Poems (20)

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    Nature's Nest 2
    Paradox 1
    innocence shed 3
    tired 2
    fora friend.... 0
    emotions soar 1
    what she sees 1
    caught by sadness 0
    the one from above 1
    love at dusk 1
    trapped 1
    purgatory 2
    broken promises 1
    who we are 1
    love waiting to begin 2
    emotions 1
    waiting 1
    senses 1
    Angels 1
    Muted Society 1