broken promises

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    broken promises

    Love spell on me be broken,
    fairytales of heart no longer be spoken,
    do not wish upon that shooting star,
    for dreams and wishes are scattered afar.

    Love potion and its falicies do not swollow,
    romance novel and all the fables do not follow,
    relinquish ur notions of prince charming,
    free urself from all magic that leaves ur heart starving.

    Cupid's loving Bow shall no longer bend,
    sonets and lover's poems can do no more to mend,
    unwrap the curse left on the heart,
    all that remains are empty feelings since our part.

    Aphrodity cover and mask the smile of bliss,
    fleeting passion and romance have all gone amiss,
    lonely red roses wither and die,
    for young lovers...these feelings deny.

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    rossmangeles commented on broken promises

    06-16-2009

    I hope that this poem is not a reflection of the past. Life is so beautiful and love is so wonderful. Pain brings distrust, but have the comfort that a billion of species of males are around and all of them are not alike. Some are bad and others are worst, but without the trust and taking risk no relation will bloom. I love the way you have written this poem. Keep it up! Enjoying your stay in Malaysia?

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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