love waiting to begin

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    love waiting to begin

    Your words are carried to my ear,
    they come dancing in the wind,
    only wishing ur pressence was here,
    you are my light in this dhin.
    You are the dream that rocks me to sleep,
    you are the soul i c staring back at me,
    you are the heart that has stolen me so deep,
    you are the love that i wish to be.
    Your touch is buried in my mind,
    you are the key that will unlock me,
    waiting for minutes to pass when our hearts bind,
    when will the greater power let this be.
    You are the heart that makes my soul weep,
    you are the voice that rises within,
    you are the love that makes me complete,
    you are what has been found...and waiting to begin.

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    litldeer commented on love waiting to begin

    06-17-2009

    This poem is nicely formatted. Being honest, I don't think it is as good as most of your work, but indeed good anyway. I like it because I can feel in your heart that you are happy writing this one. The ending is full of hope and you deserve that. Great write.

    rossmangeles commented on love waiting to begin

    06-16-2009

    Hi! It is indeed so nice to read a poem from you that is full of hope, expectations and positive note. I just read your broken promises. The two poems are poles apart. Keep it up my dear! You are so talented. Smile and have a wonderful day.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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