i have to ask

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    i have to ask
    Is it possible to fall in love, knowing the only thing you'll gain is a broken heart? Can you give yourself to someone so completely that when you lose them, you lose yourself? Can you love someone enough to make them stay?

    Is love really strong enough to conquer all?

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    Oblaidon commented on i have to ask

    02-17-2010

    Reminds me of the song, "I can't make you love me" by Bonnie Raitt. You really can't.
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    bloomingsun commented on i have to ask

    12-28-2009

    yes... not really... no... and yes... JMO,though! Nice write, I like the way you pose the questions.
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    Oblaidon commented on i have to ask

    12-28-2009

    Take your relationship slow and careful. They don't have to end in a broken heart. Don't ever lose yourself or what you believe in. Love is a two way street. You can't love someone into loving you. And, I don't believe it can conquer all, but will help you to deal with it all. -Just in my humble opinion.
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    StandingBear commented on i have to ask

    12-28-2009

    Yes to all of the above! When one loves one's self first everything else falls in place. Fine write!
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    keisha47 commented on i have to ask

    09-03-2009

    it is possible because no matter how the love of my life luis makes me sad, angry, hurt, broken-hearted, i always find a way to go back to him no matter how much he treats me bad...to me, hes an asshole but hes someone that i can't see my life with out and even though he has a girlfriend and it brakes my heart to see them together, i will always cherish his love and friendship.. so don't think anything to much but i think were deffenetly on the same page with this one.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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