Losing My Best Friend

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    Losing My Best Friend

     Gleaming lights of desperation giving way to hate.
    Smothering years of hope and peace just to tempt our fate
    Deception and lies all bundled in the past we sought
    Yet not understanding the feelings that were brought
    Holding fast to each direction that to us life had tossed
    Thinking back it was the arrogance we should have lost
    Now standing in the threshhold of what's yet to come
    To our our hearts are open but our mouth's are numb

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    supplyofgrace commented on Losing My Best Friend

    08-05-2009

    I remember feeling like this when my best friend finally died to cancer. It was so hard to put it to words but you did a great job to describe the hurt and disapointment people can feel!
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