Shadows Of When

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  • Lost Love

    Shadows Of When

     Standing in the passions of desire one hopes
    to reclaim
    Love is a spledered opportunity of which is
    not to name
    Carrying hope across the threshold of life
    as time passes by
    Giving way for doubt and lustful thought only
    to have to cry
    I reach and yet find nothing to grasp and
    the air it seems thin
    But desire keeps the heart in focus and it
    remembers when
    The songs they play, The world it turns, For
    that I have no tears
    But losing all I have ever known, that
    controls my fears

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    jam4muzic commented on Shadows Of When

    08-05-2009

    Wow! Just ah-mazing. The title best suits the poem itself. I like the rhyming that occured here and there. Just brilliance=). Would you mind checking out my poems? I'm new and want to know other people's opinions...
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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