It seems nothing I do< we be good enough for you. I keep my mouth shut and slowly kill myself inside. I speak my mind, I'm still in the wrong. I don't understand why this has to be. I'm trapped in a corner suffocated I can't breathe. Sadly this is mylife and not a bad dream. I reach for the friendship I know is there, just out of my grasp with mental despair. Nothing I say is right for you. when will you just stop and listen, I'm not the one judging you. You offer me nothing in exchangs for my time. I'm made out to be the bad guy. The words I say, you rearrange. No matter the tone or how sweet I try to speak. All you hear  is that your a mess.
  LIsten to me and kisten to me good. You have no right to judge me or make assumpyions when you don't want to listen to the words I speak freely. I'm hoenst and trustworthy. I have never done you wrong. I've stood by you and still stand you near. What do you want me to do, stop and live in fear?

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alb29oclfl commented on Suffocating


A very deep write, I know from my life, a number of people that this would apply to, and describe what they did to those around them



Thanks, I wish those that were around me would see it...

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

ThatGurl’s Poems (27)

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Tunnel Wind 0
Tunnel Wind 0
Tidal wave 0
Suffocating 1
Seperate me 2
Mirror 1
Inhale... 1
Goodnight 3
Are you kidding me??? 0
Changes 0
Searching 2
Who am I??? 1
Sleep 2
Blackflag 1
Silence that grows 5
Smile 3
So genuine, So innocent, So pure 2
Screaming 1
Unborn Child 0
I Gave You 2
Stare into the Shadows 2
All those unskopen words 1
I've missed it... 0
Dark Days 1
Lonely Tear 3
I Dream... 2
Catching my breathe 1