The Dream

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The Dream

Waves breaking across the foot trod sand

Erasing the past with a majestic hand

Mist cools the wounds that will never heal

The salt stinging the burns that are starting to peal

 

Shadows seem to come and go

The moon casting her breath taking glow

The sun brings the knowing light  

Along with the hearts ceaseless fight

 

Columns of words play the tune

From the winter through spring, and June

I’m melting in this vivid dream

Of memories haunting until I scream

 

I still see you standing there

Promises broken without a care

The pooling words that break my heart

Through the minds window they neither end nor start.

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TheLastCowboy commented on The Dream

08-22-2012

This is a powerful Dream/poem, Love it!

Olan01 commented on The Dream

12-02-2010

Oh, this is good, very good. I love you works in metaphors. Olan.

jamie7121f

12/02/2010

Thank You!! It's always a pleasure to have you read my work.

kdarcy commented on The Dream

11-30-2010

An excellent write all around, I don't know where to start, I'll leave it at that, be well my friend k

lonelyboy77 commented on The Dream

11-29-2010

this is sweet!!! Great write I love the rhyme, it adds to the emotion you give off through the words.

jamie7121f

11/30/2010

Thank You :)

gogant commented on The Dream

11-29-2010

Those ever shifting sands......the tides......the memories, good and bad, move along with them...........Very nice......................gogant

jamie7121f

11/30/2010

Thank You !! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

jamie7121f’s Poems (20)

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Title Comments
Life's Path 2
Goodbye 4
Closing Doors 1
Merry Christmas M's 4
The Dream 7
Stars 9
Twlight 9
At The End 6
Pretty Perfect Memories 5
Swan Lake 8
Where to Begin 14
These Eyes 10
Rain Drops 13
Camp Fire 6
It's That Time 5
You Gave Me 4
Letter to My Bank 1
Mourning 6
A Broken Past 3
A Friendship Lost 6