The Empty Room

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The Empty Room

The empty room with no way out
with empty thoughts just tossed about

The empty room with no way out
with doubt and fear just tossed about

The empty room with no way out
with darkness looming and tossed about

The empty room with no way out
with no one to turn to, to be without

The empty room with no way out
with prayers of hope to be given out

The empty room with no way out
with rays of sunlight tossed about

The empty room with no way out
with lessons learned and debt repaided

The empty room with no way out
with a new outlook on life and hope restored

The empty room with no way out
with an opened door and a brand new start

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sandman commented on The Empty Room

05-03-2009

u had a good idea but i think u cheated urself. u r better than this judging by your vision. Thank you for the chance to read it

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Does it matter? 0
YOU 0
ME 0
Why Me?? 0
Who I am.... 0
I am just Me 0
this guy 0
Love Sucks... 0
Life 0
MyDay 0
A Friend 0
Who Am I? 0
Happiness 0
People are Always Around Us 0
People Come into Our Lives 1
Looking for a Dream 0
When We Move On... 0
The Window... 0
I sit.... 0
Alone 0
SLEEP 0
I Wonder 1
There is... 0
Hope & Faith 0
Waiting.... 0
you 0
To Play 0
nothing for me 0
Our Friends 0
Darken Place 0
thoughts.. 0
The Empty Room 1
Friends.... 1
and time goes on.... 2
Us together 2
what we can handle 1
Life changes.... 2
that Someone Special 0
it does not matter 1
more out there 2
having faith.... 0
outside my room 0
to be set free 2
What I am looking for.... 3
Life overwhelming.
...
1
Life.... 3
the darkness... 3
My Favorite Cair 0
doubt... 2
you & me 2
Did I...... 0
nothing...... 1
YOU 1