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    untitled 6

    in this violent exit
    whispered sighs are confined
    to selfish whims of pride
    an undeniable past of walking fast
    with an underlying hate
    full of cries found only inside
    just try

    (you are a failure.)

    so we step away
    tactically refined
    strategy undefined
    and i regret my easily fingered mind

    (you are noone, going no-where.)

    finally giving in
    to a narrow minded drive
    and a passive compliance to lie
    in your shadow
    lined with lies

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    brokenwings25 commented on untitled 6


    well done. beutiful poem and picture too. I think I am not the only one that can identify with your poem.

    wagus commented on untitled 6


    Again no Title so came in to see if could see one... Whispered Sighs jumped out since first and last words no good here... as read it over a few times that stuck with it..... Whispered Sighs.. also noted no caps or periods commas.... again good let reader add or leave out......wagus

    monkyntz commented on untitled 6


    excellant very deep loved the ending

    lightcourier commented on untitled 6


    I love the pictures at your exhibition. Nice display beautifully done! Thanks!

    Grito commented on untitled 6


    In expression, we find redemption.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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