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    him

    with each breath
    we wait
    for anything to go wrong
    and we cling to each other with-
    trembling hearts
    minutes go by
    and silence
    we gasp for clarity
    we search for answers
    we hold tighter and tighter
    as our hearts beat faster
    and faster
    we sigh and we stop
    and we fall and we fall

    together we fall
    as silence unravels our minds
    and traps us in time





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    kkirkwood commented on him

    05-05-2013

    I like how you repeat word in this poem it has a very nice beat and rhtythm

    kdarcy commented on him

    12-31-2010

    Well done, I enjoyed the write..............have a good New Year k

    lorenzo commented on him

    12-21-2010

    i wish i could praise this poem without using words, because my words most surely will fall short.......

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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