Words Written In The Sunset

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    Words Written In The Sunset

    When I think of her

    There's a perfect rhythm in my heart

    I can hear a soft sweet melody

    And it makes my speech an art

     

    She jests, I jest

    And we speak in subtle vagueties

    And she makes my words flow like a wine

    On all sunsets such as these

     

    And best when written; I cannot speak

    She tells me I've such a way with words

    And so simply do her own inspire

    Though best I'm never heard

     

    So write in rhythm as my heart beats faster

    All so beautiful a muse might read

    I hope she feels as she makes me

    On all sunsets such as these

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    MysticFalls commented on Words Written In The Sunset

    06-20-2011

    I like it it pretty speacially the line at the end "All so beautiful a muse might read".
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    TheRaven

    06/20/2011

    Thanks, I'm really appreciative that you took the time to read my poem, doubly so that you enjoyed it.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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