behind these tears

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behind these tears

Behind these tears my soul is flying
don't give into fear
I'm trying.....

Got so many questions
that I'm dying
don't give into fear
I'm trying.....

Gave you all I was inside
now my soul cries suicide
left me here to cry alone
I'm crying......

behind these tears my soul is flying
don't give into fear
I'm trying.....

Got so many questions
that I'm dying
don't give into frear
I'm trying

All alone I face the night
without you
things aren't right
see these tears
I'm crying.....

behind these tears my soul is flying
don't give into fear
I'm trying....

See these tears
I'm crying.... crying..... crying.....

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StandingBear commented on behind these tears

07-07-2009

Let it out Poetrygal45. A great outing of emotions and feelings from deep within. "Behind these tears my soul is flying" Great lines, great write.

WhiteKnight commented on behind these tears

07-07-2009

awesome poem. ican really relate to this poem. check out mine. i think you might like them ryan

laydbak1 commented on behind these tears

07-06-2009

I love how you made the emphasis here, just repeating i'm trying... A well conceived write and it implores the reader to root for you all the way; for you're giving it your all... A good write...

randomthoughts commented on behind these tears

07-05-2009

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california commented on behind these tears

07-03-2009

what a beautiful poem!! reads like a great song, if only someone had the music to go along......... there are some really fine writers on this site, and you are one of them. If you want, write me back and let me know how you develope your work, where inside of you does it all come from?

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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