Heartaches cry

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Heartaches cry

A vision of beauty she was
her soul could not be concealed,
In her eyes held heartaches cry
she laid bare and revealed.

Longing for her lovers touch
a hunger deep within,
driving forces moving her
to find his love again.

Droplets flowing to the ground
each from pools of blue,
longing to hear those words again
those words she thought were true.

But silence fell around her
and she knew she was alone,
that he would not come for her
for his heart had turned to stone.

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StandingBear commented on Heartaches cry

06-30-2009

Love lost somewhere in the mix of life. Just a while and certainly you'll be able to pick yourself up and be stronger than before. Great write.

WordSlinger commented on Heartaches cry

06-29-2009

I really love your perspective, since I'm a man and all, this is very touching, and teaching me alot. And I love your rhythym is poetry. Very drivable!!!

randomthoughts commented on Heartaches cry

06-28-2009

(: ............................always dream.................................................... :)

ladypooh commented on Heartaches cry

06-28-2009

wow I like the way you touch on pain here, I think you have got your pain beat. I salute you for what you done.

dragonfly1023 commented on Heartaches cry

06-28-2009

we shed tears for many reasons but those of sadness are perhaps the most powerful. I believe tears are natures way of cleansing the soul. this is a lovely write.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

poetrygal45’s Poems (62)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Apples 1
This is a love story 2
Gone I go now~ 1
Kisses~ 1
Beyond~ 0
Tears~ 2
Beyond what you see 0
Deeper waters 1
Rambles 0
The mountains are calling ~ 1
She sang~ 0
tic toc 0
Uncut chains 0
Love holds me.... 2
My Garden 1
kick 1
Repentance 0
emotional abuse 8
untitled 0
Journey 8
Yet 6
Another fight 9
Vanities Crime 9
Lost innocence 5
loves, holy, fire. 12
Baptism 19
The hands of faith 7
behind these tears 5
A bit of blarney 10
A daughters grief 6
echoes of goodbye 7
Heartaches cry 6
To love myself at last 8
Set free 3
Unfit love 5
A feather fell from heaven 4
Goodbye 105
on the wings of a dove 1
Drifting 5
The kiss 5
Flawless wings 4
night come softly 1
forest song 2
mystery's plan 6
Young lovers 10
Black Roses 9
Expectant heart 5
His Face 1
Her need. 2
Majesty in Flight. 7
On my knees 6
My gift 6
In moments like that. 2
Wilted flower 6
Two shades of gray. 2
In His foot steps. 3
Under his wings 3
One single rose.. 9
A symphony of praise 3
brooding eyes... 4
Little raggamuffin 13
broken bird 7