Closeness

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    The feeling of being happy to lose someone

    Closeness

     The closeness of your lips.
    The closeness of your hands.
    The closeness of your love.
    All the closeness of you is fading.
    Your fading kisses, embraces and never lasting love.
    The closeness of you is fading while you trampling on my heart is still so fresh.
    The closeness of being alone is clouding up my mind.
    The fading of you is getting closer and yet I feel so relieved.
    I can feel the closeness of my future without you.
    A happy future full of freedom.
    Freedom that is forever mine.
    Something that you will never have.
    While I hold this freedom so close.
    I'll forget the love you never gave to me.
    Because this is the closeness of losing you.

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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