Crossed Lines

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A love meant to last

Crossed Lines

I've crossed the line of like and have fallen straight into love.
I've laid myself into the safest place i know, your arms.
The arms that hold me tight and never let my doubting thoughts wander.
As I stare into your mesmerizing eyes, I lose myself in you.
I've fallen in love with the gentleness you've shown to me.
You've given me the strength to believe in love again.
I have crossed a very bold line.
The line between like and love.
And I have crossed that line with you in my heart.
I've crossed the line of like and have fallen straight into love.
In love with you.

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