Don't forget about the love

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Don't forget about the love

I stand before you guilty

And I’m begging for your mercy.

 

How can I be for given?

I am truly sorry.

 

And I know that I broke your heart

But in spite of all I’ve done, I need for you to still love me.

 

I only need to ask that forget about the past

I want to make this right so that our relationship can last.

 

If it helps I can remind you of all the good times we have had 

And shared together.

 

So please take my hand

And let me know while I’m on one knee

That I am still your man.

 

You don’t have to forget about the pain that I put you through

But i don’t want you to forget about the love that we have been through.

All i ask and need for you to tell me is that you want forget about the love.

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Doninha commented on Don't forget about the love

10-11-2009

Beware of overly harsh critics! In my opinion, you are not missing any words, and you are certainly paying attention! We experience each other's poems so differently! I easily understand that you mean won't instead of want in the last line. I really appreciate your phrasing and I continue to imagine your poems as songs. As you dig deeper, you can surprise yourself with your written expressions!

almonord1990

10/11/2009

well to tell you the truth, i did started off as writing songs but realized songs are poems.Thank you!!

Stryx commented on Don't forget about the love

10-11-2009

I'm sorry, friend - this is certainly heart felt, but not that good of an appeal. Missing words, means you aren't paying attention. Slow down.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

Title Comments
Title Comments
In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7