your past

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your past

Looking in the mirror thinking about how long people put you last

 

Looking in the mirror contemplating on what you have been through in the past

 

Looking in the mirror wondering how long your beauty last

 

Looking in the mirror deliberating on all the people you have been with in the past

 

Looking in the mirror talking to a reflection of yourself gets you no where and no answer

 

That you need to succeed so live your life without thinking twice until you are put to rest

 

Taking nothing to your grave that happened in the past but the best so you can rest.

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Luscious40 commented on your past

11-02-2009

Love this!! I hope you took my advice. There are too many of our young, doing wrong. THIS IS YOUR OUTLET!! Don't let anyone take that from you.. Keep writing. Not all, is going to like your work, so you just have to digest the good with the bad, trust me; I know it make you much stronger. I love your work.. Luscious

almonord1990

11/05/2009

thank you.. And yes i will

MIKE3447 commented on your past

10-04-2009

MANY OF US LIVING TODAY NEVER THINK LIKE THIS. IT JUST TOUCHED ME BECAUSE ITS TRUE. AND EVERYTHING YOU SAY IS TRUE. I LOVE YOUR WORK.

jademelissa74 commented on your past

10-04-2009

This piece is very inspirational and very heartfelt. I like the passion in which you have written this poem. Good job!

almonord1990

10/04/2009

thank you

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

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In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7