Fallen Leaf

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    Fallen Leaf

     This poem is called Fallen Leaf

    Our lives are like fallen leaves
    Because when a loved one dies we all grieve
    As the leaf blows along with the dust
    Hopefully it comes back to the One we all trust
    You know the One (God) with all power in His hand
    Because while you were on earth
    He wanted you to understand
    That your life can be shaken just like a leaf
    So please go to Jesus before you are deceased




    written by Marvin AKA Mrpoetry

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    dreamadaily4 commented on Fallen Leaf

    09-02-2009

    This is a short, powerful piece. I'm scared of death because my father is in stage four cancer of the liver right now but I choose to believe he is healed, through God. We just haven't been told yet. This Fallen Leaf, is so beautiful, yet scary to me. It really hits home. I'm sure others will like it just as much. Wonderfully written.
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    Mrpoetry

    06/16/2010

    thank you and God bless you

    mysticmynd commented on Fallen Leaf

    06-17-2009

    I couldn't help but think of an old hymnal, Come to Jesus, while reading your poem. It's simple, gentle, encouraging, and packed with force. I Like it
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    melissapaige commented on Fallen Leaf

    06-16-2009

    beautiful poem! our lives are just like leaves.. and yes we must all KNOW that GOD has the almighty power, I do understand this. very touching and moving... thankyou. just recently lost my brother and my best friend from high school.
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    Mercy70 commented on Fallen Leaf

    06-05-2009

    a Fallen Leaf hold so much truth to it. I wish there were words to express how this one hs brought a little more peace to the voids in my heart from my loved ones who have been calle home, again, I thank you!
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    Mrpoetry

    06/16/2010

    God is Awesome

    Applepie commented on Fallen Leaf

    06-05-2009

    True, so true, like your comparison to a leaf. Time is so precious and short, we don't ever know when that day will come, I remember old folks always say he's coming you never know when so you have to be ready.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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