is it worth it

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    is it worth it

     why risk the love of your life over a nut
    because what you're doing to her heart, it really cuts
    the love, trust and honesty it's out the window
    all because you wanted to creep on the down low
    just think of the hurt you put on her face
    because you decided to go over to another woman's place
    so you kept ignoring God's voice
    telling you to go the other way
    but you made your own choice
    and let satan lead you astray
    telling your wife I just got caught up
    when your only intention was to bust a nut
    now that you lost the love of your life you once had
    maybe next time you will listen to God's voice
    telling you to go home and just take a cold bath

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    BringMeBullets commented on is it worth it

    01-07-2010

    This is very nice. It tells everyone a very important lesson. What a story. Great job.
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    madea commented on is it worth it

    10-09-2009

    MAN YOU HIT THAT HARD!!!!!!! THATS A GOOD THING SUGAR.
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    jesusfreake commented on is it worth it

    10-05-2009

    oh my gosh.....the wisdom in ur poems are astonishing. You blow my breath away with the knowledge ur poems share and how u create another and better way to escape the temptation of many men...
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    Mrpoetry

    01/07/2010

    thanks blue you know your big bro will always keep it real

    ginga commented on is it worth it

    07-20-2009

    Mr Poetry, A truer word never said and more husbands and wives should adhere to. Great advice. Ginga
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    LTSavoy commented on is it worth it

    07-02-2009

    i like the message this conveys and the emotion of betrayal it confronts.....
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