Brand New Dance

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    Brand New Dance

     This poem is called a Brand New Dance

    Let me stimulate your mind, body and your soul
    And tell about a man named Jesus
    who loves you, so let Him take control
    He will take you from a state of has been
    And wash away all your sins
    Although you do exotic dance
    If you accept Jesus no one can pluck you from His Hands
    Because He can see deep inside
    Every time you dance, it brings tears to your eyes
    Your flesh is saying do your thing
    But your spirit is saying listen to the Heavenly King
    Because He will never lead you wrong
    And He will have you dancing to a brand new song
    This is coming from a friend that really cares
    And to let you know that Jesus will always be there
    Because He is the One who gives everlasting love
    All you have to do is accept Him and look above





    written by Marvin Crutchfield

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    lucindaclaire commented on Brand New Dance

    12-04-2009

    And thank you again, Marvin. All is not lost when we lean on the Lord. His yoke it is easy His burden is light. He will always listen with wisdom that's right. Bye for now, Lucinda
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    1990lh commented on Brand New Dance

    10-31-2009

    wonderful as always I’m reading your poems cuz I’m in tears, and i feel like life is not worth much. but your poems r always uplifting and i seriously need to be lift. thx
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    dumplin commented on Brand New Dance

    10-23-2009

    I'm finging it difficult to believe that God will not give me something I cannot handle. I'm not handling things very well at all lately, mrp. I try to be jovial and comical, but it's a mask.
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    faithwalker7 commented on Brand New Dance

    10-21-2009

    Fabulous witness..and so true..Oh so true keep up the good work...Faith
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    jamila commented on Brand New Dance

    08-18-2009

    very nice mrpoet..may Godbless u more and more...great FAITH to GOD you have...keep it grows more and continue inlove with HIM... smile for the LORD!
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