RIP HOPEFULLY

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    this poem will leave you thinking

    RIP HOPEFULLY

    RIP  Hopefully

     

    You may be deceased

    But are you really resting in peace?!!!!!

    Did you accept Jesus Christ before you died

    Or did you choose the one that always lies ( satan )

    Did you accept the One that loves you eternally for life

    Or the one that’s gonna give misery and strife

    Did you accept the One who died for us

    Or the one who always puts up a fuss

    Did you accept the One who says come to Me for free

    Or the one who says it’s gonna cost you a fee

    Did you accept the One who wants your mind, body and soul

    Or the one whose home is an never ending black hole

    So I hope you chose it with precision

    After all it was your final decision

     

     

     

    written by marvin crutchfield (thru Jesus Christ)

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    winterkou commented on RIP HOPEFULLY

    07-21-2010

    Very nice message We only have two choices one to be cast into the flames and be miserable . Or accept Jesus and live in etrnal peace and have everything you ever need
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    mdpoetgirl commented on RIP HOPEFULLY

    06-26-2010

    Awesome message... the choice is ours. It's great that we have free will, but such a shame for those who abuse that right and make the wrong decision. If only they'll heed the message of this piece...
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    Mrpoetry

    06/28/2010

    thanks for your comments. God is the answer because Jesus gave His life so we can have eternal life.

    cheronld commented on RIP HOPEFULLY

    06-18-2010

    Tupac was a complex soul...and even though gangsta rap is not my thing.....I have listened to some of his words and was pleasantly surprised....among all the cursing is stories of his life and that of his friends...about where he came from and what he has now....about the only love he knew....not the cushy stuff but the hardness that was his world...I believe he made that decision before that night ever came to be....his delivery was just different than most and yet understood by many....great poem...
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    Mrpoetry

    06/21/2010

    thank you for your comments

    SuperChick76 commented on RIP HOPEFULLY

    06-18-2010

    Indeed a poem for thought. Many ponder what lays beyond death. Me? I say let what's to come, come. I believe Jesus died for me so I hope I'm right. But if I'm not, than c'est la vie... well... such is death in any case. Nicely written.
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    Mrpoetry

    06/21/2010

    thank you for your comments. I work and write for Jesus

    1990lh commented on RIP HOPEFULLY

    06-18-2010

    this is real talk mrp. i wonder about this all the time. it's like sometimes i feel like i dont even wanna wake up, but im not sure where im goin so i wanna wake up hahha.
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    Mrpoetry

    06/18/2010

    since you chose Christ you will definitely rest in peace

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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