Just a Reminder

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    Just a Reminder

     My feelings are still the same
    I hate you more
    so nothing has changed
    you're (satan) still up to your old evil ways
    Deceiving people until the last days
    you promise people fortune and fame
    not telling them
    it's an exchange for their souls into eternal flames
    so satan just give up the fight
    because you already know your ugly plight
    it's a lake filled with unquenchable fire
    made for you and those who followed your desire

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    Vonn commented on Just a Reminder

    02-22-2010

    love the headstrong way you wrote this. direct and very to the point. this really got the message across. i love this
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    christy73 commented on Just a Reminder

    02-13-2010

    lmao....this poem so goes with my day ...my whole week ...well hell my whole life has gone he only comes into your life when u let him....dam i let him run me for so long and now iam taking back my life.....can i hear a amen...awmen
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    Mrpoetry

    02/23/2010

    amen

    LadyLuck commented on Just a Reminder

    01-14-2010

    what a beautiful way of describing a downfall to desire and the way u saw straight through Satan's conniving ways
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    Kat1984 commented on Just a Reminder

    08-04-2009

    I love that you have faith in God that show thou in your poem. Thank you for show your faith it is refresh.
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    Tempestlady commented on Just a Reminder

    07-27-2009

    We got his number, loved the piece, and the rhyme. I will read your poetry anytime. Good write. Write on....
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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