This Planet

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    This Planet

    This Planet

     

    This planet was built on the foundation of love

    Because it came from God of heaven above

    It was pulled out of the deep blue sea

    When God spoke and said let there be

    But somehow satan has infiltrated

    And drop his seeds of greed and hatred

    Causing this world to be in a recession

    Making everyone in a state of depression

    But our value of life shouldn’t be on just things

    It should be on pleasing Jesus and making the angels sing

    God already told us that He would heal our land

    If we repent and worship (Him) The Son of Man

    He has made it so simple

    Because He is going to pop satan, just like a pimple

    If we just use our bible as our main tool

    So in the end

    We will not be made to look like a fool

     

     

    Written by Marvin Crutchfield (thru Jesus)

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    winterkou commented on This Planet

    07-21-2010

    This earth was founded on God's love and we need to accept that love the greatest love any man can ever know
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    shaniac commented on This Planet

    07-14-2010

    as brokenhearted said, im not religious, but this was very good. :) "Because He is going to pop satan, just like a pimple" made me laugh haha.
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    brokenhearted11 commented on This Planet

    07-06-2010

    im not religious, but i love this poem! really! very good write. keep writing :)
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    mdpoetgirl commented on This Planet

    06-26-2010

    Interesting write, MrP... I enjoyed it. One suggestion: Fix the line "He has made so simple." That's an incomplete thought and if you added a word or two, it would flow better... for example: "He has made it all so simple" Otherwise, great job ;-)
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    koolmom0 commented on This Planet

    06-25-2010

    Well I'll tell you what MR P...I am looking forward to the day when Jesus comes back to reclaim his planet, and all his followers. :) Kool
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