crying alone

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    crying alone

     why are these weak-willed women giving their man all the control
    not knowing they're risking something precious losing their soul
    all for the sake of saying I've got a man
    or some prefer the title husband
    but a HUSBAND is a provider, lover and he really cares
    someone you can depend on, who will always be there
    he loves his wife and family
    he will do anything for them don't you see
    Because God says love your wife as Christ loves the church
    one thing about love it should never hurt
    so husbands please treat your wife right
    or you'll be the ones crying alone at night

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    lucindaclaire commented on crying alone

    12-04-2009

    Mr poet, If only other men thought the way you do the world would be a better place If only more men knew. ttyl, Lucinda
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    1990lh commented on crying alone

    10-31-2009

    another beautifully expressed poem, and i agree with you 100%, but many are blinded by what they think is love
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    InfinityKnott commented on crying alone

    10-05-2009

    Nicely done. It has a very uplifting message. Good work and god bless.
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    happy63 commented on crying alone

    09-28-2009

    THIS POEM MAKE ME THINK OF ALL OF MY PAIN. WHEN MY HUSBAND ALL WAYS PLAYING GAMES. BEATING ME TRYING TO MAKE ME GO INSAIN.GOD LIFT ME UP, AS THE DEVIL INTERUPED. KEEP WRITTEN LETTING PEOPLE SEE THERE IS VICTERY.
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    WillCurl1 commented on crying alone

    08-25-2009

    This is straight from the heart and it provides a truth often ignored. Good job my friend.
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