Mother Knows Best

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Mother Knows Best

When I was a teenager I was mean as hell,
My mother tried and tried, her attempts fell.

I thought that I was the big mans gift
Ha, what a joke on me.
I disobeyed her ended up in a coma for 74 days
That was because I did not listen to moms ways.

I ran with the bad seed 
For it was rebellion that I did need

You should always listen to mom

Her way is the bomb 

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Dancer022597 commented on Mother Knows Best

08-20-2009

LOL about the last part! This is so true for so many teens and u did a great job expressing is! Awesome job and keep it up!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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