My Heart Hurts

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    My heart is so very tired now.....there is no more left in me

    My Heart Hurts

    My heart hurts for you
    when you leave me all alone
    My heart hurts inside 
    denying me what I've known

    It cuts so deep into me
    what am I supposed to do
    with all this love I have inside
    that is all meant for you

    My heart hurts so much
    You promised we were one
    I didn't see this coming
    Now all I feel is numb

    Your absence stabs my heart
    in ways I never could conceive
    Empty now I stand alone
    Just a shell you did deceive

    swan

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    Sx9 commented on My Heart Hurts

    07-27-2010

    we can all vibes to this in life if u live long enough this will come,,strong story and I get it,,we feel ur pain,,walk good..
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    purpleswan

    07/27/2010

    Thank you for stopping by to read my poems Sx9, and for your comments. Welcome, I look forward to reading your work....Swan

    sunshine33710 commented on My Heart Hurts

    07-27-2010

    Very awsome write, I love it. A couple years back or so my heart was hurting also. My husband and i went through alot, it was almost like he was cheatin on me with one of my frineds that i meet and she almost tore our marrage apart. So therefore we are not friends with her anymore. We are goin on stronger then before.
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    purpleswan

    07/27/2010

    Thank you sunshine. I was hurting very much. I am moving on now. but there are times....well sometimes it never heals completly. Thanks again................................Swan

    ginga commented on My Heart Hurts

    07-02-2010

    swan, Words that yearn and ache and cut. The pain is all that is left. (You may relate to my poem, "Let It Go" ty for revealing your inner feelings and naivete. ginga
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    purpleswan

    07/07/2010

    Thank you kindly ginga. I will read yours too. It is good to get connection through others work as well........Swan

    Corinna commented on My Heart Hurts

    06-11-2010

    Deep emotional read, thank you so much for sharing it with us...
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    purpleswan

    07/02/2010

    Thanks Corinna, sorry for the late reply. My heart has been so busy. Thank you for your kind words......Swan

    Corinna

    07/03/2010

    Time is worldly, poetry owns no calendar. From the pits of reality fantasy by verse rebels. Hugs always on hold wrapped in rhyme when reality allows. ♥

    alicecullen commented on My Heart Hurts

    06-11-2010

    that is amazing and is filled with so much emotion and i can tell what your saying very clearly that this is writtin from the heart
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    purpleswan

    07/02/2010

    Your comments are greatly appriciated. Sorry for the delay. It's been a difficult time......Swan

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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