My Heart Hurts


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My heart is so very tired now.....there is no more left in me

My Heart Hurts

My heart hurts for you
when you leave me all alone
My heart hurts inside 
denying me what I've known

It cuts so deep into me
what am I supposed to do
with all this love I have inside
that is all meant for you

My heart hurts so much
You promised we were one
I didn't see this coming
Now all I feel is numb

Your absence stabs my heart
in ways I never could conceive
Empty now I stand alone
Just a shell you did deceive


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Sx9 commented on My Heart Hurts


we can all vibes to this in life if u live long enough this will come,,strong story and I get it,,we feel ur pain,,walk good..



Thank you for stopping by to read my poems Sx9, and for your comments. Welcome, I look forward to reading your work....Swan

sunshine33710 commented on My Heart Hurts


Very awsome write, I love it. A couple years back or so my heart was hurting also. My husband and i went through alot, it was almost like he was cheatin on me with one of my frineds that i meet and she almost tore our marrage apart. So therefore we are not friends with her anymore. We are goin on stronger then before.



Thank you sunshine. I was hurting very much. I am moving on now. but there are times....well sometimes it never heals completly. Thanks again................................Swan

ginga commented on My Heart Hurts


swan, Words that yearn and ache and cut. The pain is all that is left. (You may relate to my poem, "Let It Go" ty for revealing your inner feelings and naivete. ginga



Thank you kindly ginga. I will read yours too. It is good to get connection through others work as well........Swan

Corinna commented on My Heart Hurts


Deep emotional read, thank you so much for sharing it with us...



Thanks Corinna, sorry for the late reply. My heart has been so busy. Thank you for your kind words......Swan



Time is worldly, poetry owns no calendar. From the pits of reality fantasy by verse rebels. Hugs always on hold wrapped in rhyme when reality allows. ♥

alicecullen commented on My Heart Hurts


that is amazing and is filled with so much emotion and i can tell what your saying very clearly that this is writtin from the heart



Your comments are greatly appriciated. Sorry for the delay. It's been a difficult time......Swan

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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