No Lifeing

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me fed up of sitting at home playing video games all day.

No Lifeing

all my life,
i have been no lifeing,
always stuck in my room,
nothing to do,
but now im here to say no more!
it is time for these feet,
to march out that door,
its my time,
to go and explore,
for if i am to be,
with the woman that i adore,
then this life of mine,
needs to contian more,
first i shall start,
wiht a license and car,
and with that,
i can go far,
it is well time,
that i get my life in order,
its time for me,
to cross over,
the adulthood border.

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Ninjaboy’s Poems (61)

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a simple apology 0
Life goes on 1
What happens to them? 0
for you 1
never forgotten 0
you 2
we should be 1
the future 2
I miss when 1
Island breeze 0
broke 0
the sad reality 1
Eh big guy? 3
My Law 2
Silent Destruction 1
The Darkest Truth 0
my own hell 0
10 months and counting 0
Never the Answer 0
hiding 1
Your Sword,Shield, and Armor 0
I know 0
This is the Night 2
the poem of many things in one 1
Together 0
life 0
free 0
War 0
Young solider 2
Broken 0
Grow Up! 1
No Lifeing 0
Conflict 0
Flaws 1
I Try 0
The Soul is Eternal 0
Reality Blows 0
My Never Ending Fight 0
Vale of Flowers 0
Words that describe you 0
Goodbye 0
Your Love 0
A pleasant Dream 0
Evil 0
fight for love 1
missing you 1
Truths Unspoken 1
the poem with no name 2
the light 1
Cuddle Munky 1
Worries 1
Love stew 4
Another chapter 1
Grandfather 2
Kaylee 0
Impossible Dreams 3
The Daffodil 3
Why 3
Questions Unanswered 2
Fairy Tale Hero 1
The Funeral 2