On Your 35th Birthday (For My Husband)

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I wrote this today for my sweet husband Johnny on his birthday.

On Your 35th Birthday (For My Husband)

I love how you hold me...
              With a firm, yet gentle touch...
Like you don't want to let me go.....
              While encouraging me to fly...

Your warm eyes speak to my soul...
              Your undying love and desire...
Your wild, untameable passion for only me...
              Your willingness for me to be myself...

Your hands caress me tenderly...
              Gliding over my skin like soft silk...
You drive me wild with only a look...
              But, your touch, sends me in to beautiful oblivion...

I now think back over our years together...
             Only to realize that this year...
On your thirty-fifth birthday...
             That I love you more than I did on my first with you...

Hold me... Look at me... Touch me...

Feel me... My passion for you... Drive me wild...

I love you... Only you... Forever...

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dahlusion commented on On Your 35th Birthday (For My Husband)

11-18-2009

A deliciously written love poem in all of its poetic creation

nini2323 commented on On Your 35th Birthday (For My Husband)

08-18-2009

so sweet I'm sure he'll love it, happy birthday to him

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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