"Poetry...Less is More"

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    "Poetry...Less is More"

    Poetry brief
    doth provide relief
    lest not the
    message be mangled


    Poetry inside
    paints pictures
    less diatribe


    A succinct word here
    descriptive word there
    better use of the language


    Distills the message
    and gets to the point
    less over bundled bandage

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    SavVySam commented on "Poetry...Less is More"

    08-13-2009

    Your simple and succinct summation is superb!!! An extra ! just to fulfill character count.
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    goinwest

    08/13/2009

    lol ironic that one has to write more (100 minimum) when responding to thoughts preposing 'less' Thank You!!

    Hampton commented on "Poetry...Less is More"

    06-20-2009

    Very clever. You managed to say a train load in a few short phrases. I am also an advocate of short and direct poems..although I am not always successful in my attempts to aply brevity.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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