September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

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    • ManOnTheMoon
    • Past the ocean, and into the clouds, we sail into the sun...

    September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

    Good night,
    My beautiful angel,
    And sweet dreams.
    May they be as amazing as you are,
    Let you travel to the farthest lands,
    Across a stretch of seas,
    Where even the sun rise,
    And sun set,
    Will never match your beauty.
    Where the flowers weep,
    For they know that they will never be able,
    To be as perfect as you.
    So that you may see the world,
    As you wish to see it,
    And have the whole world,
    See you,
    As you wish it to.
    So that you can be everything
    That you want to be,
    With no boundaries too high,
    Or no cost too great.
    Never fear,
    For I will be there too,
    To be by your side,
    And you will never fear,
    So your nightmares will disappear.
    You are my angel,
    I care for you so,
    Let your head rest easy,
    No tears tonight,
    I will always be with you,
    Now,
    And whenever you wish,
    Ill be in your dreams.

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    AbysmalGoddess commented on September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

    11-20-2010

    You have made her the luckiest girl in the world, whoever she is. Beautiful write, it strikes a tender note on the cords of the soul, it couldn't be better better.

    Embraced commented on September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

    10-15-2010

    We have a soft side that lurks inside and once in a while it stabs from within to be seen. Very Nice. E~

    christianprep commented on September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

    10-09-2010

    its a good write.... very good i rate u a 9 because i think it would be cool to put a name to the poem... but it was very good

    ManOnTheMoon

    07/26/2011

    Ah, but where is the fun of a title when one can expect what to read? ha ha. I thank you for your time to read and compliment

    nonners commented on September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

    10-08-2010

    ahh such wise word from such a young man. but i loved it none the less well done!!!

    nam1292 commented on September 6, 2010, 2:01 AM

    09-21-2010

    moon that was amazing it was like as if to speak to every girl in her own way when she reads it. ty it helped me find sum of the peace i am searching for

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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