STRINGS

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STRINGS




Attached with no strings......
I have choices.....
In all things......
I hear in voices.......


There is a God........
He brought the gift of life......
Jesus was His name.......
He was not full of strife......


Peaceful, gentle, teaching........
He came to me.....
Don't think I'm preaching.....
I just choose to see......


Now I choose.....
To give......
Rather then steal......
I choose to praise......
Rather then gossip.....
I choose to heal......
Rather then wound.......
I choose to be me .....
Rather then you.....
We all were made different....
This is true......


The greatest thing is.......
In the moment of our earthly parents.....
Surprem love.......
We were made of complete love......
By Him and no other.....
Thank you Jesus.....
No strings......
This I have discovered......

Just my choices......
By all meens.....
I let Him use my voice......
I hope I reach my dreams.........


red

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Tempy commented on STRINGS

05-03-2010

i hope you reach your dreams in a pleasing journey. Nothing worse than being pushed in head first landing flat on your face welcoming your dreams..... i'm afraid life has pushed me now i'm awake dreaming a nightmare. I liked your write

redbloodink

05/08/2010

well ty Tempy.... I hope your nightmare comes to an end soon and your dreams become reality........ red

bellagal commented on STRINGS

04-15-2010

I choose to be me ..... Rather then you..... We all were made different.... This is true...... i love this line. nice poem!

redbloodink

04/15/2010

ty Bella.................. I'm glad this rung true too you... and you enjoied it..... rd

soulwriter commented on STRINGS

04-13-2010

NO strings indeed, no puppet master, but a caring master nonetheless.... forgives and relieves as we press on to live on this place called earth. Great testimony!

redbloodink

04/13/2010

Ty Soul....... I push on and I know His spirit is right there....... red

Teardrops commented on STRINGS

04-09-2010

HI red loved the poem and you have hit this one out of the park its really beautiful and full of truth Marie

redbloodink

04/10/2010

ty Tear....... red

dumplin commented on STRINGS

04-09-2010

Hey Red! Just one little mistake. It should be "Rather than" not "Rather then". Oh, and "Supreme" and "means". Other than those little spelling errors, it was a wonderful poem! I only wish I could believe again. I'm at rock bottom right now, but I would feel so guilty to go to church and get down on my knees. I don't want to be a hypocrite.

redbloodink

04/10/2010

That's not a hypocrite........... some one done on faith and hope needs the church.... and the church needs them...... Just giving myself a lil push some times from within helps me.... Then some-one comes along and I feel it in my deeps it's God... the spirit of love how ever one see's it pushes me along even more.......... Just keep the will to live He can do the rest if you just give out some love jsut to do it.... wanting nothing inreturn............ red

redbloodink

04/10/2010

* Down......... the spirit of love or how any one may see it pushes me along even more.......... .......... Just keep the will to live He can do the rest if you just give out some love just to do it.... wanting nothing inreturn............love and more will flow back........... it amazing to me some times... red

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