Time

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    Time





                                                    Time



     Sometimes ticking fast
     We all know life will not last
    Looking to our past

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    homa commented on Time

    10-10-2009

    nice poem...thank you...your mind act very well... im iranian and i cant speak english well... i couldnt find beter words for syaing my feeling about your nice poems.

    Dreamer123 commented on Time

    07-20-2009

    short but wonderfull thank you for sharing. This really makes you think. to make you have the best life you can every have while you can. thank you very much for sharing. this is some real stuff. and is true time ticks us by nice great write

    scrye commented on Time

    07-20-2009

    Sometimes more is said with fewer words. I really like this cowboy and quite frankly be one of my favs on the site so far. Nicely done. A perfect 10

    Minerva22 commented on Time

    07-20-2009

    Short sweet and to the point. In three lines there's a lot of truth. I like it, and love it for its simplicity.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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