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I don't remember who I wrote this for. I think I wrote this for a women I fell in love with and yet she didn't acknowledge me in that way. Just used for her own entertainment. Kind of sad but everything happens for reason.


I know you think my love for you has began to wander
The question of my love for you, no need to ponder
I know it's been a short time since we've became one
Your love for me makes my heart way a ton

I love your smile it brightens my day
Just yearning to lay with you on a sandy ocean bay
I don't know where I'd be without you in my life
I'd love if someday you became my wife

Walking hand in hand through lifes wicked path
Smiling as you wash our baby in a bath
Sharing love and wisdom between our kindred souls
Setting and achieving all our lifes goals

Se deep down in your heart I hope you see
Without you I would not be!

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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