A Quick Melt

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    A Quick Melt

     ice prisms snag
    afternoon spectrums
    of white winter light
    bend and braid it
    squeegees off a rainbow,
    a Crayola corolla in each
    melting drop suspended
    from the tips of icicles

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    laydbak1 commented on A Quick Melt

    07-05-2009

    Short and simple, yet this piece brings together a gentle image of something almost serene we've all seen a million times.... Well done...
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    linlee

    07/10/2009

    I started with short little poems, and eventually I took courage and started writing longer ones. This one is an example of how I wrote every poem not that long ago. Sometimes I think I write stronger pieces with fewer words. Thank you for commenting again.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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