Keyboard of May Flowers

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    (space) is how I have tried to place spaces.  When I just hit the return key to put spaces between stanzas, it doesn't seem to do what i expect, so I've improvised. I hope it doesn't bother anyone too much.

    Keyboard of May Flowers

    music of amber sunlight
    warms air and pillow-soft breezes
    charm the trees knobby
    with April leaf buds
    that turn to soft lime clusters,
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    green pop-corn balls of small leaves
    for May first, for Memorial Day,
    later the duets of rain and light
    shingle trees with layers of green
    that flutter, applaud, and sway
    with each strain of notes
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    with each opus and spring aria.
    flowering trees are each a garden
    unto themselves, each a tune.
    the forsythia go for the bold percussion
    materializing the sunlight
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    into startling golden leaflets.
    clouds look unfinished,
    poring through the sky with no
    clear outlines. symphonies;
    poodle-cut shrubs anchor houses
    in well-combed lakes of grass.
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    cypress spurge is two songs
    harmonizing with flat-topped
    clusters of yellow flowers
    at the summit of pale olive
    needle-like leaves,
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    and pastel green powdered
    fiddleheads begin to uncurl.
    such melodies sing to the soul.
    a stone wall beneath pines
    looks rusty with discarded needles
    and cotton-ball pussytoes remind
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    us of snow, growing in colonies
    occasionally scattered across sunny lawns
    while tulip trees champion
    lavender decorated tulips.
    skunk cabbage is unrolled
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    next to jack-in-the-pulpits
    and a jackhammer woodpecker
    machine guns a dead maple.
    such glorious music eases release;
    we get to share the light with heaven
    when we appreciate angelic songs of nature.

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    Cielo commented on Keyboard of May Flowers

    07-17-2009

    Beautiful, picturesque, I can smell the sights and sounds. You've painted your words so beautifully.

    linlee

    07/25/2009

    Hi, Cielo, it's nice to meet you over a poem, and my poem at that. Thank you for taking the time to read one of my poems and to comment. I guess you can tell that I'm a nature lover. I'm branching out a little, though, for the sake of this site. I'm going to try to write a poem for each of the majority of categories. It's a challenge for me, but that's bound to be a good thing for me. Thanks again.

    laydbak1 commented on Keyboard of May Flowers

    07-05-2009

    This piece started slowly, but developed nicely as it goes along... A nice description of the sights and sounds of the earth awakening in late spring and early summer tones as an analogy to a symphonic chorus with all things involved... I couldn't picture the -yellow flowers- of the cypress tree, but I could imagine what you meant there... An enjoyable write...

    linlee

    07/10/2009

    What more can I say other than to thank you. Do you have any ideas on how to get past the slow start?

    linlee

    07/10/2009

    I hit the button too soon. I also wanted to say that I didn't think that the beginning was slow, so I need to understand what about it made it seem slow to you. It may be something that i can watch for and work on.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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