Middle March

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    I have a "middle" poem for every month, and I had great fun taking the challenge to write them.  I've decided to put a couple of them up.

    Middle March

    Mercurial assault maneuvers give way
    to clusters of reconciliation through
    the snuggle melody of rain, running streams
    the caprice of biscuit-warm days
    and ginger-colored winter-dried weeds
    (space)
    poking through the thread-bare
    fading coverlet of old snow
    to snap like rugged banners
    in winds still February chilled.
    Lime blabberings of spring
    (space)
    are not yet even whispers,
    but expectation watches the willow
    whose seductive streamers green first.
    Middle March nature is
    an epiphany by committee
    (space)
    of sky, trees, water and sun
    advertising April's mercies and prophecies
    with soft cathedral voices.
    Our vinegar-tie-dyed indoor skin
    seeks compassion in sun searching days.
    (space)
    Through the spiny ribs of the larch
    Middle March is a Christ-like month
    of unpretentious anticipation of spring,
    Winter's repentance, if you will,
    and days that reflect every season.

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    dragonfly1023 commented on Middle March

    08-02-2009

    I would love to see all twelve months of this collection linlee. your vivid descriptions are extremely original and a wonderful experience to read. another great addition to P.O.E.T.S.

    laydbak1 commented on Middle March

    07-05-2009

    I enjoyed this piece... You brought to bear, several time-honored strings of images of this time of year... I agree with BDI, nature poetry is inspiring all by itself and a great respite from the oft-times drudgery of reading through so many done-me-wrong, done-me-right pieces... I enjoy those too, when they present a really good attitude at their core, but sometimes, truly pleasant reading happens from real life; ie, real people doing real life things, and people telling of real life things... nature is real life and always a joy to experience off a poet's pen... Well done here...

    linlee

    07/10/2009

    Many thanks, laydbak1. It's my solace as well as my inspiration and my joy. This earth is so wonderful, don't you think? Have a great day.

    BDIsernhagen commented on Middle March

    06-27-2009

    ALAS! THERE SHE BLOWS! I cannot expain how blown away I was when I clicked on your profile to see 4 out of 5 poems being nature ones! I am a huge fan of nature poetry, and am glad to have found another! thank you for the comments! and thanks for posting your work!

    linlee

    06/29/2009

    Wow, another nature lover, as well as another poet. This is so very cool. I like to write about what I love (nature) a lot. I'm really glad to meet you. We should be friends.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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