My Last Goodbye

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I wrote this poem and three others while I was gone for a week.  My husband is abusive emotionally, mentally, and spiritually (I think, he doesn't agree), and we are in the process of talking out how to make a break from each other.  This was the result of him yelling at me that I can't make it on my own.  (I think, he doesn't agree.)  I've decided that I need to have a better attitude than him to survive him.

My Last Goodbye

I'll say my last goodbye
and then I'll say no more;
I'll share my last and final word
while walking out the door.
Remembering some good,
I'll smile and walk away;
for all I have and still have not
I'll face a different day.
I've felt the sting of death:
you've spent your evil years
by poisoning my gentle heart
and playing on my fears.
But I will rise above
the harm that you have done;
forgiveness and sincerity
will prove that I have won.
When I have packed my things
and found a place to be,
while others think revenge is sweet,
I won't let that be me.
How many times I've lost
my self-respect in pain
of insults, lectures, nasty names,
but it was all in vail.
I won't retaliate;
I won't be sad and blue.
I'll say goodbye and walk away
and say a prayer for you.

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kdarcy commented on My Last Goodbye

01-23-2010

An excellent write, with a softness holding back fury not allowed to grow and hurt everyone in its path. Find your like spirit after a time of quietness, grow in ways new to you, for your heart is deserving ... all writers hearts are that way. k

StandingBear commented on My Last Goodbye

10-13-2009

Such a kind and gentle spirit you are linlee. Certainly you deserve kindness relative to the kindness that dwells within your soul. Great write.

Mainer commented on My Last Goodbye

07-21-2009

Wow, this is so powerful. It must feel like a release to say these things outloud. My best to you.

linlee

07/25/2009

Thank you, Mainer. This was a big step for me to let go, forgive, and let him be who he is rather than taking his abusiveness personally. It's him, not me. Thank you for your comment.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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