Begging For You

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Another poem of the past. This one was meant to be a song, but it wasn't very good (as I'm an awful songwriter), so I just cut out the choruses and made it a poem. Hope you enjoy my sadness. :)

Begging For You

I don’t know why I feel this way

What price am I having to pay?

Was I once too happy,

Before the world gave you to me

My sadness offers no release

And I pray for it to simply cease

 

But I can’t escape the thoughts

Forced to watch as my heart rots

And I fall to pieces, feeling broken

Just waiting for your help to begin

And I know I’m waiting in vain,

But that’s better than all this pain.

 

I’m calling out, reaching just to you

You know damn well what to do

And I know damn well that aint happenin’

You just don’t care enough to begin

It’s the truth, don’t you deny

You know you love when I cry

 

This is too much for this heart

My world slowly falls apart

I could really use someone

Though I know I’ll get no one

I think I’ll just stop trying

That could end my crying

 

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