CREATURE

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CREATURE

THERE IS A CREATURE, I KNOW.
WHEREVER I GO, SHE GO.
SHE HELPS ME STAY ABOVE THE UNDER TOW.
WHEN SHE REARS HER UGLY HEAD, TURN AWAY AND BE VERY SCARED.
SHE NEVER TURNS HER ANGER TOWARDS ME.
BUT, WHEN SHE'S ANGRY, IT IS A FEARSOME THING TO SEE.
THIS CREATURE IS MY ALTER EGO.
I MUST SUPPRESS HER BECAUSE SHE IS VIOLATILE AND UNPREDICTABLE.
 I PRAY FOR HER IMPRISONMENT,
SO I CAN RELEASE MY PEACE AND CONTENTMENT.
I WANT MY CREATURE TO LEARN JOY, KINDNESS LOVE, AND PEACE.
SO, WE CAN MELD AS ONE AND NOT BE SEPARATED BY STRIFE PIECE BY PIECE.
I AM SHE AND SHE IS ME.
SOON WE WILL BLEND AND KNOW THE SWEETEST GLEE.
THERE IS A CREATURE I KNOW, WHEREVER I GO, SHE GO.
SOON, WE WILL BE SEPARATED FOREVER MORE.

TRINA N.THOMAS-EADDY 10/10

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ApaqRasgirl commented on CREATURE

11-21-2010

dearheart that was a very true heart felt write straight from your heart carried by your spirit. wonderful write dear.......do not fear her but instead open up your spirit to the light that guides you on the path that love and peace finds and she too will feel the richness and passion of the light touching her soul and releasing you both to love.......well done my friend.......love asha Namaste

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/22/2010

So true. I'm working on her. She will eventually get to where she needs to be. Thank you for reading and commenting.........E

sweetchinee commented on CREATURE

11-16-2010

This is a feeling i know all too well....but what i find is it's not that u're not strong enough to control that part of yourself.... sometimes we just let it loose so we don't have to care for the moment until good sense prevails.... very honest write...I'm feeling it!

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/17/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm definitely strong enough. I am working to have a balance, because in life balance is the key...........E

JadedJezzabel commented on CREATURE

11-12-2010

interesting display of that eveil twin inside us all..........very cool

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/13/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your feedback.I am a fan!!!.....E

kdarcy commented on CREATURE

11-11-2010

An excellent description of what we sometimes allow to control us. You seem to have put it in its place for the moment, well done. Be well k

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/13/2010

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate your feedback....E

Teardrops commented on CREATURE

11-10-2010

She is a part of you too i agree with butterfly embrace her then you can put her where she belongs . You are strong and can controll this other great write . Marie

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/13/2010

Thank you. She is a work in progress. We will blend eventually and come to a happy medium.....E

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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