On a clear day

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Clarity and focus on my purpose

On a clear day

On a clear day, I look in the sky.

My eyes I raise up high.

I see the works of my God and

know that he exist.

Who but the Almighty can create

such beauty as this.

I give him my praise my love and my life.

In return he helps me deal with my pain and strife.

On a clear day, my thoughts are at peace.

I am calm and able to relax, relate, and release.

I love to feel the sun on my face. 

It makes me feel I can complete the race.

A race that I will allow my God to set the pace.

On a clear day, my thoughts are clear.

I am focused and able to hear.

My path is straight and sure.

it will lead me to a life that is secure.

On a clear day, I see all that my life will eventually be.

Living on a paradise earth, No worries or problems

taking hold,

because my God is in complete control.
TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 09-13-10





 

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BlackButterfly1 commented on On a clear day

11-03-2010

I love the spiritual poems! I felt a sense of peace and calmness just reading it. Well done my friend.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/04/2010

I do too. They have a way of centering you and focusing on something greater than yourself. Thank you for reading and commenting...........E

Chaos128 commented on On a clear day

09-17-2010

You can't state your case any plainer, or straighter. The faith that works for you is always the right one.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

09/17/2010

Thank you Chaos. I appreciate the feedback.

shakeme4life commented on On a clear day

09-15-2010

Beautiful tribute to the most highest , an inspirational write , God has your back and if he needs any extra muscle i'm sure to be there .

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/08/2010

THANKS LADY! OF YOU HAVING MY BACK I AM MOST CONFIDENT. ;-)

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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