I'M HURT

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I'M HURT

                               I'M HURT!

YOU DON'T CARE!!
               

            YOUR NOT EVEN  
             AWARE!!!

              I'M HURT!!!!!



   


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ahardwalk commented on I'M HURT

11-27-2010

I'm shocked how there are so few words here yet, you can feel every single one of them. Great poem!!

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/29/2010

Thank you so much. Sometimes, I have a little doubt, because I am an emotional writer. Thank you so much for your positive encouraging comments...........E

smoothdame commented on I'M HURT

10-08-2010

truer words were never spoken we often don't realize someone is hurting until it is too late, sometimes you have to make some noise.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/09/2010

INDEED!!!!!! THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT SMOOTHDAME.

shakeme4life commented on I'M HURT

10-04-2010

your hurt , how can i help , how can i stop it ... and still be fair .... almost a haiku

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/06/2010

THANKS SIS. I KNOW LIKE ME YOU WANT TO HEAL ALL THE WOUNDS. THIS ONE WILL TAKE GOD'S TOUCH. LUV YA!

SuperChick62 commented on I'M HURT

10-04-2010

It's definitely very clear as to the meaning. More like a painting... Anger and aggression described bluntly.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/04/2010

Thank You SuperChick62. I try to be as clear as I can because that's the only real way to get people to understand. Thanks for your comment.

Chaos128 commented on I'M HURT

10-04-2010

You make the frustration very clear, but the only way you'll ever get a compassionate response is if you tell the right people. True props to you. It took heart to write this.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/04/2010

Thanks Chaos128. I appreciate your words and your comments. Your insight is beyond belief, Thanks for reading my work and commenting. ;-)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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