WHO AM I?

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WHO AM I?

WHO AM I?

I LIKE ME.

I AM MORE COGNIZANT OF WHO I WANT TO BE.

A PERSON FULL OF HONESTY, LOYALTY, AND TRUTH.

A PERSON WHO KNOWS THAT A PART OF LIFE IS COMING UNDER JAH'S REPROOF.

HIS CORRECTION IS FAULTLESS.

I TRY NOT TO CONDUCT MY LIFE IN A WAY THAT IS THOUGHTLESS.

I WILL TAKE MY GENTLE SPANKINGS FROM THE MOST HIGH.

FOR THOSE WHOM HE DISCIPLINES HE LOVES.

HE GIVES US ALL PERFECT INSTRUCTION FROM ABOVE.

HE ALWAYS TELLS ME THE REASON WHY.

HE PREPARES ME TO BE THE BEST I CAN BE.

HE NEVER TELLS A LIE.

I CAN HAVE CONFIDENCE IN THAT FACT.

ALL HE SPEAKS WILL NEVER COME BACK.

IT WILL HAVE SURE SUCCESS.

HE WILL HELP ME AND GUIDE ME TO BE THE PERSON HE LOVES AND ACCEPTS AS A FRIEND.

AS CLAY TO THE GREAT POTTER, I WILL ALLOW HIM MY CLAY TO BEND.

HIS WORK HE HAS GIVEN ME I WILL LOYALLY TEND.

WHO I WANT TO BE, I AM WORKING TOWARDS BEING THE BEST I CAN.

A SERVANT OF JAH WHO LOVES HIS LAWS.

A PERSON WHO WALKS A PATH THAT SHOWS I AM GRATEFUL TO BE WHO I AM.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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BlackButterfly1 commented on WHO AM I?

11-03-2010

Spiritual. I like it. They say if you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything. I always enjoy reading spiritual poems. It shows that you are humble enough to know we can't make it in this world alone. Great write.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/04/2010

Thanks for reading and commenting. I really value your opinion.......E

shakeme4life commented on WHO AM I?

10-17-2010

I didn't know you followed Jah !!!! i'm coming to know him myself ,,,, all and all i believe you will get what you need to secure yourself ,

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/19/2010

Indeed. The Most High will not forsake me. thank you for reading and commenting............E

smoothdame commented on WHO AM I?

10-13-2010

this was a nice poem it was nicely put and executed you should be very proud of yourself.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Thank you so much for you encouraging words..........E

Jammin commented on WHO AM I?

10-11-2010

Oh I love this. "For those whom he disciplines he loves." I can't tell you how that struck a chord in me. It just echoed through me like the soul bell.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/11/2010

Thanks Jammin. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and commenting........E

honeypot commented on WHO AM I?

10-11-2010

Yes we must be the best we can be and with Gods help we will can well done.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/11/2010

Thanks Honeypot, I appreciate your thoughts..........E

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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