MY WATER

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MY WATER

WATER IS A BEAUTIFUL THING.

IT BRINGS REFESHMENT TO THOSE WHO THIRST.

YOU ARE LIKE REFRESHING WATER TO ME.

TRICKLING OVER MY HEAD, LINGERING ON MY TONGUE,

CARESSING MY NECK, LAPPING DOWN MY SPINE.

YOU ARE SO REFRESHING.

I AM CLAIMING YOU AS MINE.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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BlackButterfly1 commented on MY WATER

11-03-2010

This is beautiful Essence!! Short and sweet yet so intriguing. This one goes into my faves.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

11/04/2010

Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting........E

shakeme4life commented on MY WATER

10-17-2010

Bold Bold statements ....well i love the competiveness of this poem ....

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/18/2010

Glad you liked it.....E

Jammin commented on MY WATER

10-13-2010

Oh my. Yes! What a wonderful treat. So sensually intimate. I absolutely love this!!!

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Thank you so much for the enthusiasm. It transmits through the print. I appreciate and value your opinion.........E

smoothdame commented on MY WATER

10-13-2010

It struch me because water seems harmless but it can be devistating, disasterous and yet also tranquil. This is also how relationships can be. good job

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Thank you. That is true. Relationships just like water can take you on a ride for better or worse. Thank you for reading and commenting..............E

Po8ree commented on MY WATER

10-13-2010

This poem struck me on many levels. Water the life force that binds mankind. Its the so a sensual carress, a union, and a relationship. A beautifull read.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Yes. Exactly we are all connected by our need for water as well as love. Thank you for reading and commenting............E

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