I CARE ABOUT YOU

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I CARE ABOUT YOU

I CARE ABOUT YOU.

     I HOPE YOU FEEL THE SAME WAY TOO.

I CARE ABOUT EVERYTHING YOU DO.

    I HOPE YOU FEEL THE SAME WAY TOO.

MY BLINDERS ARE ON AND, YET, STILL I CAN SEE.

    YOUR EVERYTHING I NEED YOU TO BE.

YOUR THE PERSON I WANT TO KISS FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE.

     ONLY YOU, AS YOUR LOYAL WIFE.

TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY

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shakeme4life commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

10-17-2010

great poem , this is what people who have been married for a long time need to read every so often to remind them of why they love each other ..

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/18/2010

Remembering why you fell in love with that person will help you treasure the relationship. Thanks for reading and commenting........E

Jammin commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

10-13-2010

I am struck by your poetry. How simply you put the most complex of emotions down. You shine a light on a well worn path and illuminate something deeper, older, wiser. I am astounded by your gift.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Wow. Thank you. Your words really mean a lot to me. I have read some of the most amazing work on this site and to have someone think the way I feel about the works of others is humbling. I really appreciate your thoughts.........E

smoothdame commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

10-13-2010

It can be amazing whey you find the perfect person for you. It makes all the hard times and sacrifices seem worth it. great job

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/19/2010

So true. Love is hard work to keep and maintain, but the rewards are limitless. Thanks for reading and commenting.......E

Tyme commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

10-12-2010

Love cover a whole slew of sins! This is what gets us through when we feel alone. This poem is what should be, always.

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

True indeed! Thanks for your comment.....E

Chaos128 commented on I CARE ABOUT YOU

10-12-2010

"MY BLINDERS ARE ON AND, YET, STILL I CAN SEE." is the key line that says everything. Being blind to a loved one's faults is... well... that's what love means... isn't it?

ESSENCEOFLOVE

10/13/2010

Just like "Perfectly Imperfect", my love is strong so I can work with his imperfections just as he does for me. Yes love can be blind, deaf, dumb, but I refuse to lose those other senses. Thanks for reading and commenting......E

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

ESSENCEOFLOVE’s Poems (66)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Discussion 7
YOU MOVE ME 9
DIAMOND 7
TO MY DAUGHTER 4
TO MY SON 8
Here You Stand 6
MY MELODY 14
PLEASURE CENTER 15
MY FOUNTAIN 6
YOU GOT ME 6
SILKEN DREAMS 22
WORDS DON'T HURT 14
SEASONS 12
FIRESIDE CHAT 9
HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM 21
DO YOU KNOW 13
LOVE IS COLORBLIND 9
I CHOOSE 8
CREATURE 12
HUMILITY 10
SEEING YOU 15
Sitting here 9
FIRE AND DESIRE 8
TOGETHER WE ARE........ 5
MY HEART 5
PLEASE ME 9
MY LIFE 4
LIGHT 4
ISSUES 7
SLOW DOWN 2
TIRED 5
BY THE MOONLIGHT 3
YOUR LOVE 3
REJUVENATE ME 4
I ACHE 2
DEEP 2
BELIEF 7
MY WATER 7
I CARE ABOUT YOU 6
DARKNESS TO LIGHT 4
FINE 8
BEAUTIFUL 6
WHO AM I? 6
RAGE 6
MY EMOTIONS 2
PERFECTLY IMPERFECT 2
WANTING 5
WRONG 7
YOUR VOICE 3
NEVER SAY NEVER 5
DANGER 2
I'M HURT 5
REFLECTIONS ON MY LIFE 6
YOUR KISSES 2
Blind In The Forest 1
MY CHILDREN 1
MY NIGHTMARE 3
I'M HOOKED 4
BUTTERFLIES 3
WORDS 1
On a clear day 3
EXPLODE 6
BEAUTY 1
SAD 1
HIS HANDS 3
YOU 1